Wednesday 21 March 2018

My Trip To The Beach

Learning goalWe are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe  using our five senses.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. 
We played in the sand. The sand got in my togs. It tickled my skin. The big waves crashed on the sand. We had taro cooked in coconut cream and crispy  chicken for lunch.
We were all tired and went back home.
                                               By Grace  

1 comment:

  1. Hello there Grace, I really enjoyed reading you descriptive text about your family trip to the beach. I could almost see the waves crashing onto the sand and lunch sounds delicious. Well done!

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